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Don't Remember Me
When my number comes up
and death draws near
i will depart this world
without regrets or fears
i hope i go as quietly
as i have lived my life
one full of both joy and strife
i don't want to be remembered
for being poetically correct
nor for awards my work begets
when you think of me
my last hope will be that
you see me as someone who
lived their dream of
connecting with humanity
through the languge of
my heart poetically.
and death draws near
i will depart this world
without regrets or fears
i hope i go as quietly
as i have lived my life
one full of both joy and strife
i don't want to be remembered
for being poetically correct
nor for awards my work begets
when you think of me
my last hope will be that
you see me as someone who
lived their dream of
connecting with humanity
through the languge of
my heart poetically.
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Re: Don't Remember Me
13th Dec 2012 4:39pm
Cool flow to this, dont worry faith no one will forget you.
cheers
marcus
cheers
marcus
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re: Re: Don't Remember Me
13th Dec 2012 4:53pm
so sweet of you to say so...thanks much, Marcus...loved your latest one...just fabulous :)
cheers
Faith
cheers
Faith
Re: Don't Remember Me
13th Dec 2012 5:25pm
No you won't be forgotten by those that know you Faith nor your poetic language my friend. Great expression and write. :)
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14th Dec 2012 4:13pm
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Anonymous
13th Dec 2012 5:49pm
Nicely penned, Faith Elizabeth,touching poem...
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14th Dec 2012 4:13pm
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Re: Don't Remember Me
13th Dec 2012 7:52pm
....and I see you as that now and will remember you with great respect and admiration. Beautifully written! xoxo
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14th Dec 2012 4:17pm
Re: Don't Remember Me
14th Dec 2012 1:42pm
Even more than the words you share... your gentle spirit will flit about as a hummingbird!
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14th Dec 2012 4:18pm
Re: Don't Remember Me
14th Dec 2012 4:20pm
Awe Faith, you are such a wonderful talent. Beautiful great friend you are too many. Don't see how anyone will forget you. I know I won't. :)
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re: Re: Don't Remember Me
14th Dec 2012 4:35pm
That is so sweet. Thank you my dear friend. I'm honored you feel that way.