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The best night of my life

I had the best night of my life,
And if I had to pick one word to describe it that word would be magical
Disney could not have taken me on a ride like this lovely woman did.
Her conversation like a soldier had me at attention
Her sweet touch healed every wound that I was suffering from
This woman has breathed new life into me
I have been reborn again.
Oh what a feeling it is to be loved
And speaking of love she electrified my soul
Between the sheets we slow danced every stroke was on beat
Looking into her lovely eyes I knew she was the special one
Allowing her step into my sun before the night swooped in and took her away  
I asked her, "Would she be my forever love?"
As she moaned, yes, oh baby, yes
We both climaxed together, our bodies dripping in sweat
As we cuddled and fell asleep until the morning came lying motionlessly
Oh my God this was the best night of my life.
Written by ElBaby (E.L.Baby)
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