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On Call Dick
I simply send one text
And there he is on my doorstep
We deliciously fuck each other
Now my step has a pep
No need to cuddle in this game
Don't give me that face
Get dressed and have a nice day
I can get small talk any place
This is far from new
It's how it works
You know as well as I do
You'll be back for the perks
And there he is on my doorstep
We deliciously fuck each other
Now my step has a pep
No need to cuddle in this game
Don't give me that face
Get dressed and have a nice day
I can get small talk any place
This is far from new
It's how it works
You know as well as I do
You'll be back for the perks
Published 7th Dec 2012
| Edited 2nd Oct 2013
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Anonymous
7th Dec 2012 5:45pm
The last stanza makes the poem, because you're right, women sometimes will do anything for dick. Haha what an awesome poem!
7th Dec 2012 5:58pm
Thank you for that fun comment!
And here I thought you were gonna write .. Women will do anything for love! Haha
No lovey dovey here in this one lol
And here I thought you were gonna write .. Women will do anything for love! Haha
No lovey dovey here in this one lol
Anonymous
7th Dec 2012 6:25pm
Good short erotic piece, socialbutterfly.
7th Dec 2012 6:48pm
Anonymous
7th Dec 2012 6:57pm
socialbutterfly,
LOL!!! anything for "love", uh huh, you do realize that was mememe, right?!!! LOL!!!
Loved your line:
"We deliciously fuck each other" Just rolls through my imagination ; ) Fun write!
tornado
LOL!!! anything for "love", uh huh, you do realize that was mememe, right?!!! LOL!!!
Loved your line:
"We deliciously fuck each other" Just rolls through my imagination ; ) Fun write!
tornado
What was I thinking!?! Lol
I love rolling around in your spectacular imagination:)
Thanks tornado
I love rolling around in your spectacular imagination:)
Thanks tornado
7th Dec 2012 8:44pm
A friend with benefits? Or just the benefits --not even a real/true friend? Kind of a harsh view of guys and what they are worth --similar to the way some guys use, abuse, and then toss aside. In this case the line 'We deliciously fuck each other' has mutual abuse connotations beyond the usual, common sexual meaning.
Still, a poem well worth the time to read, consider, and enjoy.
Thank you for writing and sharing it with us.
Still, a poem well worth the time to read, consider, and enjoy.
Thank you for writing and sharing it with us.
7th Dec 2012 10:44pm
JJJayJr - whatever the case it's a mutual agreement, in this case a fun one with no strings attached.
You are too kind! I appreciate your comments:)
You are too kind! I appreciate your comments:)
7th Dec 2012 11:11pm
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27th Dec 2012 10:09pm
Good lawdddd .... what has this world come to ... !?!
;-)
Indeed, it's all been covered, friends with ... etc ...
All I can say is that ...
Whoever you're txting, best have his game ready !!!
Nice piece of written eroticism ....
Got me thinking of that piece of ass that was on tap before txting was in !!!
Thnx for that !
;-)
Indeed, it's all been covered, friends with ... etc ...
All I can say is that ...
Whoever you're txting, best have his game ready !!!
Nice piece of written eroticism ....
Got me thinking of that piece of ass that was on tap before txting was in !!!
Thnx for that !
28th Dec 2012 1:01am
It's always best to have your game ready, never know when that phone will ring, right? :) thanks for reading!
28th Dec 2012 8:53pm
True, True ...
.... but you would seem to demand ....
Quite the Performance SB !!!
Ha.....
Bless.
Virge
.... but you would seem to demand ....
Quite the Performance SB !!!
Ha.....
Bless.
Virge
