alice in hell

I always wondered why, if Wonderland was beneath the earth, the characters could see the sky. Anyway, this is another great poem, short and succinct and very chilling, though also worldly wise. You're quite a philosophical poet, really.

wow thanks for all the very powerful compliments.. i like that descriptions "chilling" thank you..

haha and good observation on alice in wonderland's world.. the cheshire cat was in smiling in the sky.. where'd the sky come from if htey were under ground.. never thought of that.. maybe it was just like a portal.. like a worm hole into a different dimension

Yeah I reckon the rabbit hole was some kind of vortex. At some point as she was falling she entered another sphere. Besides, the whole novel was so deliberately nonsensical, like one long acid trip, that perhaps such questions are unfair haha.

id just argue over which drugs were used i say shrooms and opium thats gotta be obvious.. fucking stoner caterpillar on a giant shroom and hes a dealer trying to pawn off the goods all the while smoking a hooka.. i doubt there was pot in there.. opium is much more of slow and constant smoke.. plus it was popular in carrolls day wasnt it?

"because we want to learn
how to see
through different eyes
worlds on top of worlds
these are not my worlds
these are not my eyes
I'm just passing through"
i love this piece

that makes me smile.. im glad