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beauty and the beach
there is something about the ocean
that brings out the earth-mother in me
it is a place i love to go to write or
to ponder life's mysteries
being out in the ocean with
the waves spraying over me
feels something of a baptism
a cleansing of my soul's debris
the beach has a magnificent beauty
that never ceases to amaze me
and makes me feel one with the earth
in rhythmn and harmony
i realize as i look out to sea
how very small i really must be
in the overall scheme of things
i love the sea for it brings
out the spirituality in me
the feeling of being totally free
like seagulls overhead and
the sand underneath my feet
or the engulfing sun warming me
to get down to the nitty-gritty
the sea is a poet's paradise to me
that brings out the earth-mother in me
it is a place i love to go to write or
to ponder life's mysteries
being out in the ocean with
the waves spraying over me
feels something of a baptism
a cleansing of my soul's debris
the beach has a magnificent beauty
that never ceases to amaze me
and makes me feel one with the earth
in rhythmn and harmony
i realize as i look out to sea
how very small i really must be
in the overall scheme of things
i love the sea for it brings
out the spirituality in me
the feeling of being totally free
like seagulls overhead and
the sand underneath my feet
or the engulfing sun warming me
to get down to the nitty-gritty
the sea is a poet's paradise to me
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Re: beauty and the beach
1st Dec 2012 1:37am
I love the sea to. beutiful write. good to have you back faith
cheers
marcus
cheers
marcus
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re: Re: beauty and the beach
1st Dec 2012 1:41am
Thank you so much, Marcus. It's nice to know I was missed. Glad you enjoyed my poem.
cheers
Faith
cheers
Faith
Re: beauty and the beach
1st Dec 2012 3:02am
I love this!!!! Nature speaks to our souls in so many ways. Fantastic write!! :)
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re: Re: beauty and the beach
1st Dec 2012 2:12pm
Thank you for your lovely comments. I'm happy you enjoyed my poem that much. :)
Re: beauty and the beach
1st Dec 2012 7:54am
What a beautiful and tranquil read! There is much serenity in the presence of the beach and ocean. Where silence of the mind can be created and inner peace born.
Faith, this poem was soft meditation for me!:) Thanks for sharing! xoxo
Faith, this poem was soft meditation for me!:) Thanks for sharing! xoxo
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1st Dec 2012 2:16pm
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1st Dec 2012 2:45pm
Thank you for your lovely comments, Karen. I appreciate them so much x
Faith
Faith
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1st Dec 2012 3:01pm
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Anonymous
1st Dec 2012 4:17pm
Great poem, ocean lady!
What you say about the ocean making one feel small, makes me remember the first time I saw the ocean as a kid. Thanks, for bringing back this golden memory!
What you say about the ocean making one feel small, makes me remember the first time I saw the ocean as a kid. Thanks, for bringing back this golden memory!
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2nd Dec 2012 2:19am
I agree totally, the beach is a great place to muse on poetry and even to write sometimes.
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7th Dec 2012 4:12pm
Re: beauty and the beach
5th Dec 2012 00:47am
You did a wonderful job on the ocean, Faith! Haven't seen it since I left Maine, Feb 1998. Thank you for bringing it and its magnificence to me with your words.
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