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Beauty Queen
Behold the eyes of the beauty queen once as bright as a light house guiding ships in from sea,now as dim as the street light at the end of the road by the old house that no one dare go
Behold the lips of the beauty queen once soft an loving,now hardened and unforgiving
Behold the heart of the beauty queen once full of love,now desolate and docile
Behold the soul of the beauty queen that once soared higher than an eagle to the place where angles dewell,now dead and grounded fit only for a grave
Her life once complete and full,now resembling of a jigsaw puzzle incomplete and missing key pieces
She was once a beauty queen standing forever by your side
Now behold the monster that your love has reduced her to
Behold the lips of the beauty queen once soft an loving,now hardened and unforgiving
Behold the heart of the beauty queen once full of love,now desolate and docile
Behold the soul of the beauty queen that once soared higher than an eagle to the place where angles dewell,now dead and grounded fit only for a grave
Her life once complete and full,now resembling of a jigsaw puzzle incomplete and missing key pieces
She was once a beauty queen standing forever by your side
Now behold the monster that your love has reduced her to
Published 27th Nov 2012
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27th Nov 2012 11:18pm
you have a few spelling mistakes, and I think the beauty queen doesnt have to be repeated quite souch but a very nice piece.
13th Dec 2012 4:43am
5th Oct 2014 00:05am
I know this comment is a bit late but yeah, if this poem was perhaps structured better (in my opinion) like splitting the sentences into smaller, easier to read verses, this deep message would be even more hard hitting!
