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The Hole Inside
Her voice cuts like a razor
Cutting painlessly along my jugular
Her words deafen my thoughts
Gentle warm hands cradle my ears
Her humor mends the soul
Smiles grow from deep within
Her love knows no boundary
How could I let this slip
My words never came
My heart left empty
My soul remains alone
Part of me is gone never to return
Love is all I want, it's all I yearn
Eternal Darkness
Cutting painlessly along my jugular
Her words deafen my thoughts
Gentle warm hands cradle my ears
Her humor mends the soul
Smiles grow from deep within
Her love knows no boundary
How could I let this slip
My words never came
My heart left empty
My soul remains alone
Part of me is gone never to return
Love is all I want, it's all I yearn
Eternal Darkness
Published 25th Nov 2012
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12th May 2013 00:34am
12th May 2013 1:17am
You know, it's rather sad that I'm the only person to have commented thus far. Why do some poets get a lot of comments with only a few reads and other poets who are just as good get hardly any comments with a hundred times the number of reads?
22nd Jun 2013 4:43am
that is the wonder of the internet poet. Like most all artist their works never become popular until after their death or some form of tragedy.
