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The Feeling
Fatigue followed directly
behind despair like rain
from a cloud it was her
body's action/reaction
to love: a bone-numbing
tiredness a feeling of
surrender an acceptance:
she sank swiftly in the
seat her head falling
forward on her chest she'd
been living for so long
beneath a tangled tarnished
knot of strain stress a knot
that had just been loosened
severed even in one sharp decision:
there was some relief in that,
at least the last lose end.
behind despair like rain
from a cloud it was her
body's action/reaction
to love: a bone-numbing
tiredness a feeling of
surrender an acceptance:
she sank swiftly in the
seat her head falling
forward on her chest she'd
been living for so long
beneath a tangled tarnished
knot of strain stress a knot
that had just been loosened
severed even in one sharp decision:
there was some relief in that,
at least the last lose end.
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