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No Forgiveness
My sins are true
My hate is pure
This pains not new
Does faith endure?
Perform affliction without anesthesia
Tribulation for a pleasured scar
It opens the gates beyond nirvana
Like having sex with an electric guitar
A lamb is tainted
A child scorned
My demons sainted
Will mommy mourn?
No revelation for a poetry whore
Only crucifixion for her, misanthropy
Writing scriptures with knees all sore
Yet oh so lovely with verses of belligerency
Pointless to regret
Exquisite sound of screams
Never will I forget
Will corpses never dream?
Touch me like a guillotine
Then damn me 'cause I give no fucks
He trusted me with quills pristine
So I wrote his suicide, now he's starstruck
My hate is pure
This pains not new
Does faith endure?
Perform affliction without anesthesia
Tribulation for a pleasured scar
It opens the gates beyond nirvana
Like having sex with an electric guitar
A lamb is tainted
A child scorned
My demons sainted
Will mommy mourn?
No revelation for a poetry whore
Only crucifixion for her, misanthropy
Writing scriptures with knees all sore
Yet oh so lovely with verses of belligerency
Pointless to regret
Exquisite sound of screams
Never will I forget
Will corpses never dream?
Touch me like a guillotine
Then damn me 'cause I give no fucks
He trusted me with quills pristine
So I wrote his suicide, now he's starstruck
Published 24th Nov 2012
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24th Nov 2012 2:53am
HOLY SHIT!!!
Excellent!!
it flowed it was a great verse for verse
every about this is freaking great!!!
you impress me more and more with every poem!
Excellent!!
it flowed it was a great verse for verse
every about this is freaking great!!!
you impress me more and more with every poem!
24th Nov 2012 3:03am
Lol thank you kindly.
I'm flattered by your praise nikki, especially since you write so well yourself :)
I'm flattered by your praise nikki, especially since you write so well yourself :)
24th Nov 2012 7:45am
Haha it's a very personal piece of the poem, one most Probley would rest better not knowing. Thank you for such a great comment. I'm glad you enjoyed this.
24th Nov 2012 5:03pm
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25th Nov 2012 2:42am
"No revelation for a poetry whore
Only crucifixion for her, misanthropy
Writing scriptures with knees all sore
Yet oh so lovely with verses of belligerency"
That was my favorite part of the poem :) The dark art of Kourtnissixxx rises again!
-Evan
Only crucifixion for her, misanthropy
Writing scriptures with knees all sore
Yet oh so lovely with verses of belligerency"
That was my favorite part of the poem :) The dark art of Kourtnissixxx rises again!
-Evan
25th Nov 2012 3:28am
Haha thanks Evan. I'm giving in to my anger, writing is the best way to do that. So glad you enjoyed it.
26th Nov 2012 3:39am
Stay angry, my friend. Maybe, someday, enough people will hear us and wake the fuck up to the abominations of the world.
P.S. Interesting avatar.
P.S. Interesting avatar.
26th Nov 2012 3:59am
I doubt my rage will subside anytime soon hun, no worries there. Perhaps one day.. One can only hope for such an unlikely string of events.
And thank you, I saw it as an image of art, showing the cruel indecency of what mankind is capable of.
And thank you, I saw it as an image of art, showing the cruel indecency of what mankind is capable of.
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29th Nov 2012 6:17am
I'm glad you could relate to this and thank you for taking a notice into my ever changing writing, I get bored with the same form of poetry haha.
I'm so surprised you would be shy! As someone I follow, I'm always excited to hear what you have to say and your opinion. I think your fucking awesome to ;)
I'm so surprised you would be shy! As someone I follow, I'm always excited to hear what you have to say and your opinion. I think your fucking awesome to ;)
30th Nov 2012 1:27pm
After diving into "Birthday" then this piece... consider reading one of these :)
You continue to express your soul with clarity. A sharp sword you unsheathe!
No comment on the continued miss spells as I know you don't care. :))
You continue to express your soul with clarity. A sharp sword you unsheathe!
No comment on the continued miss spells as I know you don't care. :))
4th Dec 2012 4:58am
I'm confused.. Consider reading one of these? Care to clarify?
And it's not that I don't care, I just don't have spell check lol I don't even know what's misspelled. My spelling and grammer are awful.
And it's not that I don't care, I just don't have spell check lol I don't even know what's misspelled. My spelling and grammer are awful.
10th Dec 2012 1:26am
Sorry, just getting back here. I mean consider recording as spoken word.
When you write in this site, any miss spells will have a red underline beneath the word. If you right click the word it gives you a choice of correct spellings and usually the top word is correct.
When you write in this site, any miss spells will have a red underline beneath the word. If you right click the word it gives you a choice of correct spellings and usually the top word is correct.
10th Dec 2012 3:01am
I don't have a computer. I write everything on evernote, an app for my phone, so I just copy and paste. I do my best but alas I'm very lazy. Haha.
I've considered spoken word but I've never done that before... Maybe one day I'll find the courage to do that. But not for birthday... That's an extremely personal piece.
I've considered spoken word but I've never done that before... Maybe one day I'll find the courage to do that. But not for birthday... That's an extremely personal piece.
4th Dec 2012 00:31am
4th Dec 2012 4:58am
Hmmm sweet? I guess I'll take what I can get haha.
I'm glad you like it.
I'm glad you like it.
