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Deeper Still

I...
am sick of this surface bullshit.
I ...need more

Too long I have gone on feeling
half dead
I need to feel life bursting..
up through my core

I need...more than your lips upon my flesh
I need...more than your body tightly pressed

I need more than our unified hips connected
I need more than our lust to be projected,AND
reflected...in each others eyes...

I need to feel alive in more places
than just in between my thighs...

Besides....what good is an orgasm
if it doesn't have a heart in which to reside
See...its not the act itself...
It's what it signifies...

I could drink some wine and smoke the finest green
Just to get that same dreamy look I see in your eyes

As you enter me deeply and say you love me...
Yet we...both know ...its all lies
So I tried to loose myself inside your
passion filled cries...

However...the truth speaks so much louder.

Harder...is not the answer
Faster...only wears you out

Deeper...is what I ask you...

Of course you think I mean your phallic member
So I ask you...to go deeper
Deeper still...
I ask you...
Can you ...
penetrate my soul?
Can you...make my chakras explode

Can you...make love ...to my mind
Can you make love to my very will...

I ask you again lover...
can you go...
Deeper Still?
Written by Firebyrd
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