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Beating Heart
I have no feelings twords anything
All I feel is empty and numb
There is nothing more cruel,sadistic
Than a broken heart
You mean more to me than words can convey
I think of you night and day
For in my silence I was stumbling,studdering
and wondering what I wanted to say
Maybe if my heart stops beating
It won't hurt this much
Can a heart still break after it's stop beating?
When I hear your name I stop breathing
I see your face in every place
If I had to choose
Between breathing
I would use my last breath to say
"I LOVE YOU"
All I feel is empty and numb
There is nothing more cruel,sadistic
Than a broken heart
You mean more to me than words can convey
I think of you night and day
For in my silence I was stumbling,studdering
and wondering what I wanted to say
Maybe if my heart stops beating
It won't hurt this much
Can a heart still break after it's stop beating?
When I hear your name I stop breathing
I see your face in every place
If I had to choose
Between breathing
I would use my last breath to say
"I LOVE YOU"
Published 17th Nov 2012
| Edited 18th Nov 2012
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17th Nov 2012 6:29pm
I have felt this way, I was sooooo busy loving him I forgot about loving myself.
love yourself first, you cant love anyone if you don't love yourself! :)
write on
love yourself first, you cant love anyone if you don't love yourself! :)
write on
How true. a lesson I have learned finally this is another onr pulled from my older writeings but figured I would still share them
Thanks for your comments and I'm glad you liked it
DD
Thanks for your comments and I'm glad you liked it
DD
17th Nov 2012 6:32pm
this is so sad but wonderfully expressed...heartbreak is so hard....this is how i felt while going through my divorce except for the ending...
So glad you could to relate to this Faith, I wrote this while going through a breakup with my fiance. Glad you liked it
17th Nov 2012 8:32pm
18th Nov 2012 3:21am
Anonymous
18th Nov 2012 00:56am
Been there b4 DD.
Nice write...Strider
Nice write...Strider
18th Nov 2012 3:23am
Thanks Strider,
hopefully this goes away before to long
tired of this feeling.
DD
hopefully this goes away before to long
tired of this feeling.
DD
18th Nov 2012 9:01pm
The worst broken heart I suffered was when my boyfriend died, I thought I would die without him and I hurt greatly for many years, but I survived and even though the heartaches since have been very painful, none was as painful as that DD.
It's about healing from within and becoming stronger so pain is easier to bear and doesn't linger as long.
Wonderful expression and pen my friend.
It's about healing from within and becoming stronger so pain is easier to bear and doesn't linger as long.
Wonderful expression and pen my friend.
18th Nov 2012 10:11pm
Oh Magdalena how hard that must have been for you;
I wrote this when out of the blue my fiance decided that marrigae was not for him and up and moved 2000 thousand miles away and just left me a note on my nightstand and to this day I have never heard from him and that was a little over a year ago, but time heals all wounds they say :) I'm golad you liked it
DD
I wrote this when out of the blue my fiance decided that marrigae was not for him and up and moved 2000 thousand miles away and just left me a note on my nightstand and to this day I have never heard from him and that was a little over a year ago, but time heals all wounds they say :) I'm golad you liked it
DD
