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My Ass Your Lips ~ Morning Rant ~
In the real world
spelling and punctuation
don't get you a gig
its the idea
the personality
the story
I almost feel bad for people
who dwell on small factors like that
their life must suck
they must have no outside entertainment
the cyber world is their only life
no real friends, how sad... not
its also clear
if you have more forum posts than poems
you should shut the fuck up and write
or perhaps your not a writer or a poet
just a boring person, who is dead inside
looking for anything to validate your worthless existence
if the proper use of your is so fucking important to you
become an english teacher, hahaha or a proof reader
I am a writer
I choose to write whatever the fuck I want, how I want
if you want to be the technicality nazi
so be it
again your life must be sooooooooo boring
and just to make it worse, I will never ever use
the correct "your", EVER
I'll leave that shit to my PROOF READER
bawahhhahahahhhhhaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh
that's me laughing at you :)
since your already behind me talking shit
while your back there, press your bitter lips together
and kiss my ass
spelling and punctuation
don't get you a gig
its the idea
the personality
the story
I almost feel bad for people
who dwell on small factors like that
their life must suck
they must have no outside entertainment
the cyber world is their only life
no real friends, how sad... not
its also clear
if you have more forum posts than poems
you should shut the fuck up and write
or perhaps your not a writer or a poet
just a boring person, who is dead inside
looking for anything to validate your worthless existence
if the proper use of your is so fucking important to you
become an english teacher, hahaha or a proof reader
I am a writer
I choose to write whatever the fuck I want, how I want
if you want to be the technicality nazi
so be it
again your life must be sooooooooo boring
and just to make it worse, I will never ever use
the correct "your", EVER
I'll leave that shit to my PROOF READER
bawahhhahahahhhhhaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh
that's me laughing at you :)
since your already behind me talking shit
while your back there, press your bitter lips together
and kiss my ass
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Re: My Ass Your Lips ~ Morning Rant ~
15th Nov 2012 4:16pm
Exellent thats is exacully how i feel about some of the fuck-bag poets i have encountred. i cant spell for toffee, i think grammer is overated, some of the "poets" or ("forum Fuckers" as i like to call them) have to point the mistakes out to feel better about themselfs, but as you say its the idea and story that count, i 100% agree with you.
fantastic rant and thanks for letting me rant on your page lol
cheers
marcus
cheers
marcus
fantastic rant and thanks for letting me rant on your page lol
cheers
marcus
cheers
marcus
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re: Re: My Ass Your Lips ~ Morning Rant ~
15th Nov 2012 4:23pm
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15th Nov 2012 4:20pm
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15th Nov 2012 4:35pm
Re: My Ass Your Lips ~ Morning Rant ~
"In the real world
spelling and punctuation
don't get you a gig "
Shhhhhhhhhhhhh Nikkeeeeeeee
You are putting the entire USA College System,
Standardized Testing Companies, State Education
Departments and their employees jobs at risk!
spelling and punctuation
don't get you a gig "
Shhhhhhhhhhhhh Nikkeeeeeeee
You are putting the entire USA College System,
Standardized Testing Companies, State Education
Departments and their employees jobs at risk!
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re: Re: My Ass Your Lips ~ Morning Rant ~
15th Nov 2012 4:30pm
how many poets do you know who got published because they were awesome at spelling and punctuation?
not fucking one.
get real I know from experience.
I have proof so to speak
not fucking one.
get real I know from experience.
I have proof so to speak
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Re: My Ass Your Lips ~ Morning Rant ~
15th Nov 2012 4:55pm
now, now. let's not be "trite" over some commentators. If you'd like, eye'el pruffe reed fowr ewe.
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re: Re: My Ass Your Lips ~ Morning Rant ~
15th Nov 2012 5:02pm
thanks,
but I'll decline the offer :)
don't need one for this site
it not like anyone here is a poet laureate.
but I'll decline the offer :)
don't need one for this site
it not like anyone here is a poet laureate.
Re: My Ass Your Lips ~ Morning Rant ~
15th Nov 2012 5:53pm
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15th Nov 2012 6:14pm
Re: My Ass Your Lips ~ Morning Rant ~
15th Nov 2012 6:10pm
Many reasons why I haven't shared on poetry website or otherwise. I took all the proper poetry classes in College and left feeling so uninspired and insignificant. I always felt "outside" of mainstream. Never "proper" enough. This is a great expression of some of the things I've always felt. Thanks!
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15th Nov 2012 6:15pm
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18th Nov 2012 7:55pm
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19th Nov 2012 4:20pm
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I enjoyed this piece all the way through! I have to agree, and being a former teacher's aide in English, I often feel compelled to let writers know when I see mistakes in their poems. But when I do it, it is in a private message. I don't do it in the forums or in poems comments where it might cause embarrassment. I think that is the reason why forum posters do it that way. They have some need to put others down, and it shows in their other forum posts. They can't change their stripes anymore than a Zebra can. When I do it, it is because I feel a poem is good and I think it should be displayed in the best light possible, to enhance the reading experience, not to create a negative feeling to make a poet feel like giving up the art. but metaphorically speaking, How is kissing your ass a bad thing?
jj
jj
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re: Re: My Ass Your Lips ~ Morning Rant ~
19th Nov 2012 2:20pm
:)
Lmao~
I work in the real world, I know whats gets you in and what does not.
Lmao~
I work in the real world, I know whats gets you in and what does not.
Re: My Ass Your Lips ~ Morning Rant ~
20th Nov 2012 3:13am
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20th Nov 2012 3:34am
Re: My Ass Your Lips ~ Morning Rant ~
20th Nov 2012 3:48am
must..not ..point..out..mistakes :D
ahh Nikki, you got spirit and attitude which are great assets. add that to the math.
enjoyable read this. go you :)
ahh Nikki, you got spirit and attitude which are great assets. add that to the math.
enjoyable read this. go you :)
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re: Re: My Ass Your Lips ~ Morning Rant ~
20th Nov 2012 2:44pm
Go ahead and point them out in a dignified way :)
my point with writing this is, people who think spelling and grammar get you gigs! its does not!
some of greatest like Hemingway couldn't spell yet their books live on...that was my point I'm tired of those who dwell on the small shit when they need to put their attention on the bigger picture, the story and the idea :)
!!!thank you!!!!! :)
my point with writing this is, people who think spelling and grammar get you gigs! its does not!
some of greatest like Hemingway couldn't spell yet their books live on...that was my point I'm tired of those who dwell on the small shit when they need to put their attention on the bigger picture, the story and the idea :)
!!!thank you!!!!! :)
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22nd Nov 2012 00:29am
Re: My Ass Your Lips ~ Morning Rant ~
27th Nov 2012 11:12am
I'll just say I can feel ya on this one, and let it go at that. Well done with the write as well.
Uley
Uley
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re: Re: My Ass Your Lips ~ Morning Rant ~
27th Nov 2012 2:23pm
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27th Nov 2012 5:30pm
*smirks*
A Bukowski fan maybe ?
As someone who doesn't wake up nice either, I get this.
Enjoyed
A Bukowski fan maybe ?
As someone who doesn't wake up nice either, I get this.
Enjoyed
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re: Re: My Ass Your Lips ~ Morning Rant ~
27th Nov 2012 6:39pm