Trite

I know that's right!


put'em on a 0 calorie diet girl!



Fire

:)

What is bad about this?  Nothing.

Lol! thanks ;)

Good stuff

:) THANKS!

anonymous wrote:
"not one person can read English?  
this is sooo poor..and the use of your for you're..  
unless u meant us the reader nothing...not you are..  
anyway..this site..gone to the dogs..."
 
yeah, apparently narrow-minded, hypocritical Anonymous Iconed ones! lol
Its OK for YOU to put 3 "O"s in so? And spell "You" as "u" ?
Plus your entire attempt to point out "wrongs" is tragically punctuated.
But hell, we understood Your statements --- JUST as much
as the poem was successfully expressed to you.
Isnt the whole idea of poetry to communicate?
Damn -- I mispell words, create words, use incorrect grammatical placement on purpose -etc- all the time.
If the writer`s intention gets across --  
whats the point of getting Fascistic about a few  
meaning-infused shapes?
And yo, even the GREATS submitted their stuff to editors better
their stuff was published.
We are indies here -- gotsta (sic) do everythang (sic)ourselves....


 

:) hahahahaghaaaahhbwaaaa

thank you drivel it obvious to me who it was look at all the past thread two haters one in the same a coward!  and then to delete the account? PUSSY :) well I always get the last laugh,


hahahahahahahahahaha that's me laughing :)
at nothing!

hahahahahahahahahaha that's me laughing :)
at nothing!
 
.....nothingness....

oy -- dont get me started........

:)

No comment. :)

But really, I liked it. I can tell you wrote this super fast.

"your" on L8 should be "you're".

Nice!

Lol... This comment is Nothing

thank you
I don't care about the spelling.
:)
I wrote it so it stays :)
nothing in this world is perfect

That's a truism if I ever heard one. Cool! I like your attitude. LOL

:) lol

word.

:) thank you Broom I really appreciate it!!!

Good stuff sweets!!

Sir Lancelott