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alone in a public place
sitting on a bench, watching them
alone in a public place
her legs over his
his arm around her
their hands laced together
eyes seeing only each other
a quick kiss
soft words unheard by watchers
another quick kiss
she smiles
her head nods
and another quick kiss
more whispered words
a near-silent giggle
she turns into him
a much longer kiss
pull tighter together
then apart
hands still clasped
he stands
pulls her up, to him
another kiss
stroll down the path
so close together
they seemed joined into one
alone in a public place
her legs over his
his arm around her
their hands laced together
eyes seeing only each other
a quick kiss
soft words unheard by watchers
another quick kiss
she smiles
her head nods
and another quick kiss
more whispered words
a near-silent giggle
she turns into him
a much longer kiss
pull tighter together
then apart
hands still clasped
he stands
pulls her up, to him
another kiss
stroll down the path
so close together
they seemed joined into one
Published 12th Nov 2012
| Edited 16th Jan 2013
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17th Nov 2012 7:04am
You have a way of telling a story that draws the reader in.
Some of my favs:
their hands laced together
soft words unheard by watchers
a near silent giggle
Very well done...I enjoyed!
Some of my favs:
their hands laced together
soft words unheard by watchers
a near silent giggle
Very well done...I enjoyed!
19th Nov 2012 3:06pm
Thank you. I appreciate you stopping by and reading my work. It is a pleasure to not only write it but to share it. I'm happy you enjoyed it. (Does it cause your heart to beat?)
25th Nov 2012 10:45pm
Everyone of your poems ive read ive really enjoyed:) Youre quite talented and i look 4ward 2 more...
27th Nov 2012 6:29pm
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- Edited 11th Jan 2013 10:35pm
11th Jan 2013 10:34pm
And do they love kissing!
Love this piece, particularly the oxymoron in the title.
I was wondering whether "a near silent giggle" may have need of a hyphen, but...I could be wrong....not too sure now.
What think you?
Swell write, whichever you cast your glance....
Pen, J3.....PEN!
Tidespotter
Ps. Yeah, we HEARD you blushing....! :-D
Love this piece, particularly the oxymoron in the title.
I was wondering whether "a near silent giggle" may have need of a hyphen, but...I could be wrong....not too sure now.
What think you?
Swell write, whichever you cast your glance....
Pen, J3.....PEN!
Tidespotter
Ps. Yeah, we HEARD you blushing....! :-D
16th Jan 2013 9:54pm
