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i'll still smell the roses
i'll still smell the roses
so precious and sweet
the scented pine needles
as they hang from the trees
i'll still hear the lonely hounds
at night as they bay
see the sky far above me
be it blue or at times gray
then someone someday
will mention your name
and i'll feel regret in my veins
for in my heart your love remains
so precious and sweet
the scented pine needles
as they hang from the trees
i'll still hear the lonely hounds
at night as they bay
see the sky far above me
be it blue or at times gray
then someone someday
will mention your name
and i'll feel regret in my veins
for in my heart your love remains
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Re: i'll still smell the roses
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re: Re: i'll still smell the roses
11th Nov 2012 00:00am
Re: i'll still smell the roses
Anonymous
11th Nov 2012 7:07am
And once more, a great poem written by you, Faith Elizabeth...It reminds me of the classic poets.
(fe Jane Austin)...Love is a wonderful theme.
(fe Jane Austin)...Love is a wonderful theme.
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re: Re: i'll still smell the roses
11th Nov 2012 5:03pm
Thank you, my friend, for the greatest of compliments. That's one of the nicest things I've been told. You don't know how good that makes me feel.
Re: i'll still smell the roses
11th Nov 2012 10:46am
The petals of a lingering love, always falling but never leaving. Beautiful sentiment and write Faith.
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re: Re: i'll still smell the roses
11th Nov 2012 5:04pm
yes, a love forever in the heart....thanks so much for your lovely comments
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11th Nov 2012 4:06pm
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Re: i'll still smell the roses
11th Nov 2012 4:34pm
Such love and longing is a struggle at times... memories alive and yet the NOW craving more. Lovely piece!
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