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Aussie to his Valentine
You’re the only one I love,
I swear by all the stars above,
You’re the only girl for me,
With you I’ll start a family tree,
Did you like my poem? (Nervous cough)
Now for god’s sake get your knickers off!
Who said romance was dead?
I swear by all the stars above,
You’re the only girl for me,
With you I’ll start a family tree,
Did you like my poem? (Nervous cough)
Now for god’s sake get your knickers off!
Who said romance was dead?
Published 8th Nov 2012
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8th Nov 2012 8:32pm
....despite my eternal joy at knocking the Aussies, it has been done better. This feels like poetry 'lite'. Go harder, go bigger, go deeper....rip the page up, lay down a life, bleed a bit...and grow some balls.
Poetry is blood and guts, not sound bites.
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Poetry is blood and guts, not sound bites.
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Poetry is heavy, poetry is light,
Sometimes poetry's even spelt right.
Some poetry's great and some poerty's shite,
Sometimes is rhymes and sometimes it don't,
Sometimes I write it, sometimes I won't
Just a joke my heavy bloke, I do it when I'm high on coke!
This was a slip a just a Quip off the lip.
Grab your shoulder and remove the chip! (Anohter joke)
Thanks for writing man! luv & hugz to you:-)
Sometimes poetry's even spelt right.
Some poetry's great and some poerty's shite,
Sometimes is rhymes and sometimes it don't,
Sometimes I write it, sometimes I won't
Just a joke my heavy bloke, I do it when I'm high on coke!
This was a slip a just a Quip off the lip.
Grab your shoulder and remove the chip! (Anohter joke)
Thanks for writing man! luv & hugz to you:-)
8th Nov 2012 9:00pm
Thank God for romantic poems like this one.
It renews my faith that romance indeed isn't dead.
Good job! Welcome to DUP and keep writing. :)
It renews my faith that romance indeed isn't dead.
Good job! Welcome to DUP and keep writing. :)
9th Nov 2012 1:40pm
10th Nov 2012 1:49am
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