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love, you, and I <3
Let us go to paris
just you,and I.
Lets float down Saint Martain
just tu, and moi.
Lets kiss upon the Eiffel tower
just one, and two.
Lets fall in love
once again.
Just as we always do.
just you,and I.
Lets float down Saint Martain
just tu, and moi.
Lets kiss upon the Eiffel tower
just one, and two.
Lets fall in love
once again.
Just as we always do.
Published 8th Nov 2012
| Edited 9th Nov 2012
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8th Nov 2012 11:38am
I like this! Very upbeat. I like the use of French and English...very romantic.
Al
Al
9th Nov 2012 1:05am
I thought i should trow at least a tad bit of french, and yeah its really upbeat. I haven't been able to wright as darkly as usual lately.
8th Nov 2012 12:36pm
9th Nov 2012 1:06am
Relationships like that//this are so cute. Wish someone would give my boyfriend the memo.
9th Nov 2012 1:17am
How cute, one little correction for you, in L5, you capitalized "kiss" needlessly yet failed to capitalize "eiffel", a proper noun.
AlwaysCaliban
AlwaysCaliban
9th Nov 2012 2:22am
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25th Jan 2013 5:20am
How cool and romantic. Enjoyed. :)
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