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One Last Attempt
I want to talk to you
but you don't answer me
I will try and try
but you hate me too much
why?
If you have something to say to me
say it
don't hold back
that hurts a lot worse
is that why u do it?
to hurt me?
you've done your share of that
I think you put me through more pain
then I put you through
I will try one last time before I give up
I want to talk to you
but I'm tired of trying
Katie
but you don't answer me
I will try and try
but you hate me too much
why?
If you have something to say to me
say it
don't hold back
that hurts a lot worse
is that why u do it?
to hurt me?
you've done your share of that
I think you put me through more pain
then I put you through
I will try one last time before I give up
I want to talk to you
but I'm tired of trying
Katie
Published 2nd Jun 2010
| Edited 20th Oct 2010
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12th Jun 2010 8:22am
Wow , i Like This Poem Because You Can Actually Place YourSelf in The Writers Shoes When They Writing This
18th Jun 2010 4:44am
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30th Nov 2012 8:01am
Thank you so much
I was very young when I wrote these. I was probably 12. I haven't written anything like this since. I miss writing.
I was very young when I wrote these. I was probably 12. I haven't written anything like this since. I miss writing.
31st Dec 2012 5:47pm
