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""SandyLeavesTrail of DeathDampDarkness""
Sandy,Sandylike
a 1955rookie-Koufax
wild'ass fastBall,
couldlike possible
put yr brains on a
splatter platter (of}
deathD[font=Times New Roman]ampDarkness
metaphorly [for]just
a CategoryOne- while here
in paradiz[m]al Fffffflorida,
(tho plunged into a ter'ble
65dgree Ch'ill)
I (per me) went to sea t'play
in th'bigger waves that was
warm&sweet, bein knocked on
me near'naked ass by wavesmack,
shinstruck bloody by oceanic
subsurface projectiles...
as The Locals took to they's
jacketcoats mustbe pro'bably
wonderin what's tha'ol'dumbfuck
doin out there - even thee surfie
boys is wearin their coveralls -
o my poorich hometown sacred
sub'ways floodin,power'down all
it's glorypowers buttlike any Humility
(if at all)w'ill soon give way
to Our precious idiotPride[s] intern
ation[al ]
competitiona conflictus, rearing&roaring
Our brazen fucktupedness for all to
Admire&Praise, just don ' t
show yrSelf's realnaked on FloParadize
beach or deathdampdark
Br o a d w a y[/font]
yyyyyyyyDKZK30OCTO2012yyyyyyyyyyy
*photoselfcreated(by)dkzkSelfPo'traitureLTD**
a 1955rookie-Koufax
wild'ass fastBall,
couldlike possible
put yr brains on a
splatter platter (of}
deathD[font=Times New Roman]ampDarkness
metaphorly [for]just
a CategoryOne- while here
in paradiz[m]al Fffffflorida,
(tho plunged into a ter'ble
65dgree Ch'ill)
I (per me) went to sea t'play
in th'bigger waves that was
warm&sweet, bein knocked on
me near'naked ass by wavesmack,
shinstruck bloody by oceanic
subsurface projectiles...
as The Locals took to they's
jacketcoats mustbe pro'bably
wonderin what's tha'ol'dumbfuck
doin out there - even thee surfie
boys is wearin their coveralls -
o my poorich hometown sacred
sub'ways floodin,power'down all
it's glorypowers buttlike any Humility
(if at all)w'ill soon give way
to Our precious idiotPride[s] intern
ation[al ]
competitiona conflictus, rearing&roaring
Our brazen fucktupedness for all to
Admire&Praise, just don ' t
show yrSelf's realnaked on FloParadize
beach or deathdampdark
Br o a d w a y[/font]
yyyyyyyyDKZK30OCTO2012yyyyyyyyyyy
*photoselfcreated(by)dkzkSelfPo'traitureLTD**
Published 30th Oct 2012
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Anonymous
14th Nov 2012 11:54am
I like the chopped up style and frantic read.
Title is fantastic, would be best read out loud.
Some parts I find hard to follow though, a bit too vague and abstract for me, well written though!
Title is fantastic, would be best read out loud.
Some parts I find hard to follow though, a bit too vague and abstract for me, well written though!
14th Nov 2012 5:42pm
thank you dropping in taking time to write...
i can't follow some parts of my own stuff either, but
'it' immediately kinda takes on 'a life of it's own', thus must just be spared further intrusions from
'my mind'-------
i can't follow some parts of my own stuff either, but
'it' immediately kinda takes on 'a life of it's own', thus must just be spared further intrusions from
'my mind'-------
