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SUN I WANT RAIN
sun please don't shine oh dear..
bring us the crystal rain drops from above..
why are some so ungrateful of such?..
why can some not accept the rain?..
and the calm droplets crashing so deathly..
sun please don't shine..
yes i love you..
yet my eyes long for crystal light shimmers..
across the sky and dew drops upon the soft yet sharp grass..
rain please fall and show us your beauty..
[justin dean kidson poemz]
bring us the crystal rain drops from above..
why are some so ungrateful of such?..
why can some not accept the rain?..
and the calm droplets crashing so deathly..
sun please don't shine..
yes i love you..
yet my eyes long for crystal light shimmers..
across the sky and dew drops upon the soft yet sharp grass..
rain please fall and show us your beauty..
[justin dean kidson poemz]
Published 28th Oct 2012
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30th Oct 2012 2:51am
FINALLY, a poem about the JOY and BEAUTY of rain. Other poems that I've read describe rain as either caliginous or achroous. Marvelous perspective you have- wait, that sounds like "Yoda" vocabulary heah.
6th Nov 2012 5:18pm
