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boo fucking hoo
don't get mad
I'm only bein real
tellin it straight up
though you can't handle
think ya don't feel
lie to ya self
inflate ya self
cut ya self
back down to size
wear ya plastic smile
oh it's alright
talk all the shit ya want
bout the prey ya hunt
coz yo ass getting played
raped an betrayed
oh poor me
fallen to my knees
your all the fuckin same
point your finger to blame
batter those lids
incorporate some kids
a shattered childhood
a condisending fuck up
but "life did this"
fucked me all up
left weak as piss
it's his fault I cheated!!
I was raped as a kid
sad if it was true
not a fucking sob story
crock of shit...
I'm only bein real
tellin it straight up
though you can't handle
think ya don't feel
lie to ya self
inflate ya self
cut ya self
back down to size
wear ya plastic smile
oh it's alright
talk all the shit ya want
bout the prey ya hunt
coz yo ass getting played
raped an betrayed
oh poor me
fallen to my knees
your all the fuckin same
point your finger to blame
batter those lids
incorporate some kids
a shattered childhood
a condisending fuck up
but "life did this"
fucked me all up
left weak as piss
it's his fault I cheated!!
I was raped as a kid
sad if it was true
not a fucking sob story
crock of shit...
Published 26th Oct 2012
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26th Oct 2012 7:16pm
i liked it alright. straight forward and your point made. it feels like it could have been more thought out but it delivers a feel of raw expression through its simplicity. if thats what you were going for great job.
26th Oct 2012 7:22pm
hey thanks for you input, and your rite about needing more thought but its my style, shit comes straight from my head then put to words, I prefer to write as I think, to add that raw train of thought rather than a premeditated story... idk it's just me.
glad you stopped by and enjoyed
glad you stopped by and enjoyed
Anonymous
24th Feb 2013 8:59pm
What a read.....brutal and in ya face....like like:)
28th Feb 2013 2:31am
thanks ugly.. got the idea from a movie I was watching and it pissed me off haha poor dude was doing his best to keep a family afloat and his wife was living another life, he started to figure out what was going on and she killed him, told everybody all these lies about him to make him look like everything was his fault and to cover he cheating and shit lol crazy movie!
8th Mar 2013 6:21pm
8th Mar 2013 6:23pm
thanks Sam
I don't really like it
based on a subject that's just not me
but was trying a new feel
but don't feel it
I don't really like it
based on a subject that's just not me
but was trying a new feel
but don't feel it
9th Mar 2013 2:04am
Well, since you have read my work, I tend to flow like this with mine. A semi fast ramble that has deadly points:) or highly emotional ones :)
13th Mar 2013 3:29am
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