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smashed mirrors
can’t be fooled,
but easily fooled
there’s no fool like
a self-fooled delusion
lies, lies, lies to myself,
but say them louder,
be convinced
wrap the falsehoods
around my head –
a hat of deception,
I wear it so well
Published 25th Oct 2012
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25th Oct 2012 11:38pm
This piece was quite sporadic and almost unintelligible save the last stanza but, I think because of that, I really enjoyed it.
Conundrum(Can a hat be deceptively deceptive?).
Keep it up.
Much Love
Duncan
Conundrum(Can a hat be deceptively deceptive?).
Keep it up.
Much Love
Duncan
26th Oct 2012 8:06am
26th Oct 2012 00:53am
I really enjoyed this. I agree with Duncan I think the sporadic thoughts make it so interesting
26th Oct 2012 8:07am
27th Oct 2012 9:56am
It kinda makes sense to me. Not one to let another pull the wool over ones eyes, but how easily we can fool ourselves, self delusion.
One looks at a triangle yet by the time it filters through the eye and into the brain, it rebuilds as square, so one believes they are looking at a square.
I look in the mirror and most of the time, loathe what I see.
A thought provoking piece Atatki, I like to make my mind work. Nicely done. :)
One looks at a triangle yet by the time it filters through the eye and into the brain, it rebuilds as square, so one believes they are looking at a square.
I look in the mirror and most of the time, loathe what I see.
A thought provoking piece Atatki, I like to make my mind work. Nicely done. :)
27th Oct 2012 5:37pm
28th Oct 2012 12:14pm
Great peice its very hard to look at a refection in the mirror, i somtimes wonder if i am the refection or the refector? this poem reminded me of these feelings.
fantastic write as always
marcus
fantastic write as always
marcus
28th Oct 2012 2:44pm
