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Keep Your Coin My Opinions Are Free
Picket fences
are for the
brainwashed
I choose
intelligence
over conformity
I want nothing
material is
meaningless
the universe is vast
as I am
I refuse to live in a box
are for the
brainwashed
I choose
intelligence
over conformity
I want nothing
material is
meaningless
the universe is vast
as I am
I refuse to live in a box
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Re: Keep Your Coin My Opinions Are Free
25th Oct 2012 3:57pm
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25th Oct 2012 5:00pm
Re: Keep Your Coin My Opinions Are Free
(nice pic)
Unfortunately, intelligence isnt something
everyone can choose.........
I live by your Credo too --
if this is fiction - then I live the fiction : > )
Unfortunately, intelligence isnt something
everyone can choose.........
I live by your Credo too --
if this is fiction - then I live the fiction : > )
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25th Oct 2012 5:01pm
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25th Oct 2012 6:35pm
Re: Keep Your Coin My Opinions Are Free
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25th Oct 2012 5:58pm
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25th Oct 2012 6:01pm
Re: Keep Your Coin My Opinions Are Free
25th Oct 2012 7:38pm
This has a Thoreau like quality about it. The illustration is beautiful. The closing line reminded me of Pete Seeger's "Little Boxes".
This was refreshing to read.
This was refreshing to read.
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re: Re: Keep Your Coin My Opinions Are Free
25th Oct 2012 7:39pm
Re: Keep Your Coin My Opinions Are Free
25th Oct 2012 9:51pm
Re: Keep Your Coin My Opinions Are Free
25th Oct 2012 10:33pm
What If I "told" you to learn then you would be doing what I "told" you....:)
Sorry I just like giving you a hard time...
Sorry I just like giving you a hard time...
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26th Oct 2012 2:23pm
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26th Oct 2012 3:41am
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Re: Keep Your Coin My Opinions Are Free
2nd Nov 2012 2:01am
WOW! You are quite the poet . Hello there you . I Love the names of your poems.. Your titles intrigue me.. I was skimming through going, this one no this one ...lol. I love it.. thank you for your comment I appreciate it..
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Re: Keep Your Coin My Opinions Are Free
2nd Nov 2012 2:51am