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Trips Through the Mind
1.
It is all in my
mind to find my
father, because
he is dead. I was
there, in the same
bed. I can still
see his shadow.
2.
It's all in my heart
that I killed my
mother, as a kid of
ten kills everything.
3.
I'm sorry as shit. I
wish that life was
different. I cry. I
try and cry.
4.
Listen shadows. Hear
me. Listen to me:
there are no more of
you: you are as unreal
as a masturbating poster.
5.
Join me in whatever it
takes.
It is all in my
mind to find my
father, because
he is dead. I was
there, in the same
bed. I can still
see his shadow.
2.
It's all in my heart
that I killed my
mother, as a kid of
ten kills everything.
3.
I'm sorry as shit. I
wish that life was
different. I cry. I
try and cry.
4.
Listen shadows. Hear
me. Listen to me:
there are no more of
you: you are as unreal
as a masturbating poster.
5.
Join me in whatever it
takes.
Published 24th Oct 2012
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Anonymous
15th Mar 2014 9:53am
I find it interesting that the first line is about finding your Father who is already dead. Of course logically if somebody is dead, you would know where they are. This suggests that you had a troubled relationship with them in life.
Going down the stanzas there is a desperate melancholy and riddling sense of guilt. Followed by the astute "Listen shadows" in the 4th stanza. What a beautiful collection of thoughts.
Thank you for the read.
Going down the stanzas there is a desperate melancholy and riddling sense of guilt. Followed by the astute "Listen shadows" in the 4th stanza. What a beautiful collection of thoughts.
Thank you for the read.
