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Grey Matter Of The Brain
thoughts
fucking thoughts
they consume me
cerebral
locked in
a mental prison
thinking
thinking
thinking
mentally engrossed
with my own thoughts
estimating everything
always thinking
over analyzing
hyper critical
breaking beautiful
down to ugly
in a matter of thoughts
logic is a weapon
I use it against myself
deducing everything
into nothing
over and over again
held hostage by my brain
fucking thoughts
they consume me
cerebral
locked in
a mental prison
thinking
thinking
thinking
mentally engrossed
with my own thoughts
estimating everything
always thinking
over analyzing
hyper critical
breaking beautiful
down to ugly
in a matter of thoughts
logic is a weapon
I use it against myself
deducing everything
into nothing
over and over again
held hostage by my brain
Published 23rd Oct 2012
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23rd Oct 2012 2:49pm
A very relatable poem to me. sometimes I just can't stop thinking. I have to tell myself to shut up.
23rd Oct 2012 2:52pm
23rd Oct 2012 3:04pm
I can relate this mind of mine keep on chatting and i always run put of note paper to write them down.
nice write nikki
marcus
nice write nikki
marcus
23rd Oct 2012 5:36pm
..the bitch of being analytical. can't escape it. Really liking the bare-bones technique you're playing with lately. It packs a punch!
23rd Oct 2012 5:52pm
25th Oct 2012 00:39am
Had me from the first line. When I got down to, 'estimating everything,' I chuckled as I was eating a cereal bar and almost spit it out because I can relate so much..like u were writing about me.
'breaking beautiful
down to ugly
in a matter of thoughts' i really like how this flows and describes what happens in a matter of seconds and in a matter of thoughts. This is a great piece and I can really relate to it.
'breaking beautiful
down to ugly
in a matter of thoughts' i really like how this flows and describes what happens in a matter of seconds and in a matter of thoughts. This is a great piece and I can really relate to it.
25th Oct 2012 00:46am
Thanks
My mom is an artist
She can paint or draw anything
any style I would always find the flaw
she always said I over analyze everything
Taking the beauty out of simplicity.
My mom is an artist
She can paint or draw anything
any style I would always find the flaw
she always said I over analyze everything
Taking the beauty out of simplicity.
