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Submissive Eyes
In your eyes
I see my possibilities
So numerous, so dark
I see me, losing myself
to my depths
of selfishness
demanding from you
those things that are my right
In your eyes
I see your fear
So deep, so strong
I see you, losing yourself
to your heights
of sacrificing
being bent to my will
by your need for my approval
I see my possibilities
So numerous, so dark
I see me, losing myself
to my depths
of selfishness
demanding from you
those things that are my right
In your eyes
I see your fear
So deep, so strong
I see you, losing yourself
to your heights
of sacrificing
being bent to my will
by your need for my approval
Published 22nd Oct 2012
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oh how lovely, hon. i'm loving the poetic meter in this, it makes it such a easy read. and i found the write innocently toxic, and i so wanted to look into your lover's eyes, lovely stuff my sweet.
kisses from p
xoxo
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kisses from p
xoxo
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- Edited 22nd Oct 2012 4:47pm
22nd Oct 2012 4:45pm
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22nd Oct 2012 5:00pm
