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Anonymous
21st Oct 2012 9:29pm
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22nd Oct 2012 6:39pm
This is a very hard subject to do well. Any error and it becomes self reflective dribble. This does not do this, though I think changing the title to simply "marks" might help to create that ambiguity. I think this is really good as is, and I am not sure if I desire to see it expanded upon. It is short, sweet, and anything else would simply take the stress off the simple, but rather powerful line.
