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Crocodile Praise
Disciples
Discipline
Religion
by adhering
being "righteous"
within yer preferred
Domini Dojo System
ya just may
perhaps....
achieve Spiritual Conscription
in some kinda
tightly regulated
Soul Saving Mission
relinquishing
freedoms
G*D given
Fer aquiescence
to sub-divisions
profit driven
machines
inquisitions
of material
acquisition
what does
ANY of this
have to do
with Spirit?
Ya know
Our nonphysical
seat of emotions
character
Our Soul?
aint
Spirituality
`sposed to be
totally free
from influence
Earthly?
A conflict of interests
so outrageous
how did individuals
fall for this
even in the "Dark" Ages?
Under the Tent
good people
fall prey
to oppurtunists
and their devious
power plays
showers
of crocodile praise
"release
join US
for the rest
of your days,
material price
is but nothing to pay
compared to
safety
within HIS grace"
thus Free Spirit
whisked away
in clouds
of gains
promises
never attained
and strictly we adhere
with mono-chromatic brains
whilst our Souls
independantly
rise
and roam through
Cosmic Plains
Discipline
Religion
by adhering
being "righteous"
within yer preferred
Domini Dojo System
ya just may
perhaps....
achieve Spiritual Conscription
in some kinda
tightly regulated
Soul Saving Mission
relinquishing
freedoms
G*D given
Fer aquiescence
to sub-divisions
profit driven
machines
inquisitions
of material
acquisition
what does
ANY of this
have to do
with Spirit?
Ya know
Our nonphysical
seat of emotions
character
Our Soul?
aint
Spirituality
`sposed to be
totally free
from influence
Earthly?
A conflict of interests
so outrageous
how did individuals
fall for this
even in the "Dark" Ages?
Under the Tent
good people
fall prey
to oppurtunists
and their devious
power plays
showers
of crocodile praise
"release
join US
for the rest
of your days,
material price
is but nothing to pay
compared to
safety
within HIS grace"
thus Free Spirit
whisked away
in clouds
of gains
promises
never attained
and strictly we adhere
with mono-chromatic brains
whilst our Souls
independantly
rise
and roam through
Cosmic Plains
Published 21st Oct 2012
| Edited 24th Oct 2012
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21st Oct 2012 2:54am
AMEN!!! Religion is personal, not corporate. Only one thing, 6th line from the bottom, should it be "mono"?
21st Oct 2012 2:57am
21st Oct 2012 3:03am
You are welcome. that's what we are here for. I just read a few of your others, and I find your "staccato" style very enjoyable. Short and to the point. I'll read on.
Anonymous
21st Oct 2012 4:24pm
I get it and concur drivel...strider
28th Oct 2012 00:55am
thanks Strider ---
but why do we feel compelled to waste breath
on stuff like this?
but why do we feel compelled to waste breath
on stuff like this?
22nd Oct 2012 4:38am
Seems to me
Spirituality
is totally free
from influence
Earthly
Yeah, like DUH!!! Insightful!
Spirituality
is totally free
from influence
Earthly
Yeah, like DUH!!! Insightful!
28th Oct 2012 00:53am
thanks for the "Duh" man ---
I was able to change the verse so
the Sarcasm is better ...
"aint
Spirituality
`sposed to be
totally free
from influence
Earthly? "
I was able to change the verse so
the Sarcasm is better ...
"aint
Spirituality
`sposed to be
totally free
from influence
Earthly? "
22nd Oct 2012 9:08pm
28th Oct 2012 00:54am
thanks FiYaH --
although -- I dont know why I continue to dwell on
the bullshit!
although -- I dont know why I continue to dwell on
the bullshit!
23rd Oct 2012 7:10am
Them Crocs jus keep smilin' as they eat. They open their jaws W_I_D_E an swallow up their living prey like it was nothin at all, jus a piece a meat.
Liked it a lot
Liked it a lot
28th Oct 2012 00:56am
thanks man --
wouldnt it be wonderful to be freed from these
meat lockers we are wearing?
wouldnt it be wonderful to be freed from these
meat lockers we are wearing?
