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Repeat

darkened heart
silently crying

radiant light
slowly dying

loving eyes
already fading

good memories
tainted, poisoned

sobbing wreck
devastated soul

falling deeper
into darkness

calling silently
for help

nobody cares
nobody sees

all gone
all gone

all alone
all alone

all dead
all dead

continuously repeating
those same words

over and over
and over again....

Written by fieryangelsouljia

(M6rr6g6n)

Published 20th Oct 2012

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Re: Repeat

ryteoutlet (myheartbeats)

20th Oct 2012 6:47pm

A few words so powerful to one's soul.
I especially love the way you begin it:

darkened heart
silently crying

radiant light
slowly dying

loving eyes
already fading

good memories
tainted, poisoned

sobbing wreck
devastated soul

falling deeper
into darkness

calling silently
for help

Deep, powerful, and moving...

Thanks for sharing; I enjoyed!