deepundergroundpoetry.com
human shit
fat-boy has been out of university 6 weeks
fresh from his masters degree
and proud of it
like it means something
got himself a job
as a minor manager
at the local waste depot
working out what to do
with the endless stream
of unmentionables
we burn through
while we make our lives
pretty
meanwhile
in another part of town
part of my own daily grind
was to get rid of an old pond
full of human shit
so I went knocking on his door
he wasn’t keen to agree to nothin’
could see it in the way he held himself;
big-fish-little-pond pain-in-the-arse
so I sucked up my ego
and let him know how hard his job must be
how much trouble I must be causing him
how thankless his task is
could see him rolling over
to warm in the sunlight of praise
so laid it on thicker
“not here to make your job harder”
“let me know if we can make things easier for you”
“my phone is always on
to help you out”
walked out of his office
agreement in hand
and then
for 8 days
covered every inch of his site
in 2 feet
of that ancient
vicious
sludge
one day soon
he’ll figure out
if he hasn’t already
that the guy who came bearing smiles
was playing a longer game
and if he does
he can thank 400 truckloads of human shit
for learnin’ him more
than his pride ever did
fresh from his masters degree
and proud of it
like it means something
got himself a job
as a minor manager
at the local waste depot
working out what to do
with the endless stream
of unmentionables
we burn through
while we make our lives
pretty
meanwhile
in another part of town
part of my own daily grind
was to get rid of an old pond
full of human shit
so I went knocking on his door
he wasn’t keen to agree to nothin’
could see it in the way he held himself;
big-fish-little-pond pain-in-the-arse
so I sucked up my ego
and let him know how hard his job must be
how much trouble I must be causing him
how thankless his task is
could see him rolling over
to warm in the sunlight of praise
so laid it on thicker
“not here to make your job harder”
“let me know if we can make things easier for you”
“my phone is always on
to help you out”
walked out of his office
agreement in hand
and then
for 8 days
covered every inch of his site
in 2 feet
of that ancient
vicious
sludge
one day soon
he’ll figure out
if he hasn’t already
that the guy who came bearing smiles
was playing a longer game
and if he does
he can thank 400 truckloads of human shit
for learnin’ him more
than his pride ever did
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 16
reading list entries 1
comments 26
reads 1482
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re: human shit
18th Oct 2012 9:36pm
hahaha. I liked it. I don't know if you meant for it to be humorous, but I found it just that.Thanks
0
re: Re: human shit
my dear....if you can't laugh at 400 truckloads of old shit, what can you laugh at?
Good on you for gettin' it...really a story for telling at the bar...
:-)
hh
(and like all bar stories, there is some larger truth at the bottom of it somewhere...maybe)
Good on you for gettin' it...really a story for telling at the bar...
:-)
hh
(and like all bar stories, there is some larger truth at the bottom of it somewhere...maybe)
re: re: Re: human shit
18th Oct 2012 10:43pm
re: re: re: Re: human shit
18th Oct 2012 11:00pm
re: Re: human shit
19th Oct 2012 4:16am
Re: human shit
Anonymous
19th Oct 2012 8:52am
This shit stinks, in a great way....possibly like roses, but I doubt you're one for flowers.
0
re: Re: human shit
19th Oct 2012 1:19pm
and the moral of the story is...
19th Oct 2012 10:04am
don't let hemi's charm grease you into anything or you might end up sitting in 400 truckloads of shite. [:
ah well. might be worth it. [:
i like the contrast in stanzas 2 & 3 with the young 'un working with "unmentionables", then in 3, dealing with you, who deals in experience, it's straight up "human shit".
in 5 & 6, the tension of the situation can't be missed in the 'warmth' of the interaction because of the "sucked up my ego" line right at the start. good show, m'dear... (yeah, bar stories can be... enlightening). [:
ah well. might be worth it. [:
i like the contrast in stanzas 2 & 3 with the young 'un working with "unmentionables", then in 3, dealing with you, who deals in experience, it's straight up "human shit".
in 5 & 6, the tension of the situation can't be missed in the 'warmth' of the interaction because of the "sucked up my ego" line right at the start. good show, m'dear... (yeah, bar stories can be... enlightening). [:
0
re: and the moral of the story is...
19th Oct 2012 1:24pm
by christ j, what pleasure there is...
yes, the title exactly..really pleased you saw that...the humour is a thin veneer, and then even the title feels like something else; resignation, or the vanity of imagined self-knowledge.
I am full of shit :-)
h.
yes, the title exactly..really pleased you saw that...the humour is a thin veneer, and then even the title feels like something else; resignation, or the vanity of imagined self-knowledge.
I am full of shit :-)
h.
Re: human shit
Anonymous
20th Oct 2012 2:35pm
Haha! Great storytelling as always!
0
re: Re: human shit
24th Oct 2012 6:37am
Re: human shit
Anonymous
24th Oct 2012 00:43am
It's a pain in the ass when you have to put up with someone else's shit so this poem gives it a good solid punch! I applaud your dark humor, HH, and for making me laugh:)
0
re: Re: human shit
24th Oct 2012 6:38am
Re: human shit
24th Oct 2012 6:06am
Hemi you are so relatable..You have an intelligence that no books or degrees can give..you have a gift in life a strong man who can set his ego aside while out smarting the shit head who thought he was so damned wise..cheers to you..Crim
0
re: Re: human shit
24th Oct 2012 6:39am
Ah well my dear...been around a while now, so know a few tricks from being rolled the same way myself :-)
Good on you C...always makes me smile to see you passing through...
H.
Good on you C...always makes me smile to see you passing through...
H.
Anonymous
- Edited 28th Jan 2019 8:46am
28th Oct 2012 2:46pm
<< post removed >>
re: Re: human shit
28th Oct 2012 8:28pm
Ah, aint you sweet...always trying to make a little bit of sense :-)
Good on you stopping by and sharing the word-love...
hh
Good on you stopping by and sharing the word-love...
hh
Re: human shit
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Nov 2012 3:24pm
6th Nov 2012 11:35am
<< post removed >>
re: Re: human shit
7th Nov 2012 9:09pm
Ah well....he'd have a different take, probably about some fuckwit engineer who screwed him over and now he'd rather piss on one than shake his hand :-)
(good man for the time you took on the piece...love it!)
hh
(good man for the time you took on the piece...love it!)
hh
Re: human shit
14th Nov 2012 5:09pm
I love you .. lol.. what the fuck WHERE IS PRACTICING HIS RUN? before i literally commit suicide.. i couldnt find you .. then i remembered you made a comment after mine on the snack thread i didn't know it was you. i have climbed three mountains walked through 5 miles of snow over a nother mountain then through the valley to find you..
0
re: Re: human shit
2nd Apr 2013 5:53am
Re: human shit
2nd Apr 2013 4:04am
re: Re: human shit
2nd Apr 2013 5:54am
Poppy....nice name ya got there :-)
Yes, trouble all the way to m' feet....that are also trouble :-)
h.
Yes, trouble all the way to m' feet....that are also trouble :-)
h.
Re. human shit
26th Aug 2020 4:57am
Lol. I wish that worked at our local dump. What with COVID the dump closes periodically, 'whenever someone gets sick,' so that they can disinfect the dump. like that makes any sense.
Good piece, well worded. Thanks for sharing.
Good piece, well worded. Thanks for sharing.
0