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Spoken Mind
Without a doubt you know I love you unconditionaly
There are times when I feel blue and out of sorts
Sometimes I sit and pout, pick my brain
Search my heart like pouring rain organize my pain let me vent
And there are times I want to talk so take me for a long walk
Down by the river or some lonely country lane lend me your ear
Offer your shoulder let me cry it out
Along with the happiness comes the darkness it doesn't mean I'm being negative life is not all rainbows and unicorns
In a fantasy land we do not live; although that might be grand it's just not reallity emotional baggage we all have,keep it
locked away and eventionaly it will drive you mad
With every fiber of my being I do my best to keep this side of me hidden
behind closed doors but... there are times when a crack in it is left and I need to rant and rave to get this stuff off my chest
So please don't slam it shut, instead just sit and listen
There are times when I feel blue and out of sorts
Sometimes I sit and pout, pick my brain
Search my heart like pouring rain organize my pain let me vent
And there are times I want to talk so take me for a long walk
Down by the river or some lonely country lane lend me your ear
Offer your shoulder let me cry it out
Along with the happiness comes the darkness it doesn't mean I'm being negative life is not all rainbows and unicorns
In a fantasy land we do not live; although that might be grand it's just not reallity emotional baggage we all have,keep it
locked away and eventionaly it will drive you mad
With every fiber of my being I do my best to keep this side of me hidden
behind closed doors but... there are times when a crack in it is left and I need to rant and rave to get this stuff off my chest
So please don't slam it shut, instead just sit and listen
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Anonymous
14th Oct 2012 7:44am
really well written in my opinion
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14th Oct 2012 8:13am
Beautifully penned. I hardly ever appreciate love poems, so great job on this one.
AlwaysCaliban
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14th Oct 2012 3:54pm
That was really good. Filled with a lot of imagary and truth. Keep it up. :)
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Thanks also Miss Faith i'm glad to be here. Reading and sharing our works, everyone here gives such insparation.
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14th Oct 2012 6:07pm
Thank you Poppa I've been gone from writing for about 5 years now and trying to get back ino the swing of things
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14th Oct 2012 6:09pm
Really nice, but I have a couple of questions.
Did you mean "it doesn't mean I am being negative?" Also, I think you mean , hid behind closed doors."
Just wanted to throw that out there. Welcome to DUP!!!:D
Did you mean "it doesn't mean I am being negative?" Also, I think you mean , hid behind closed doors."
Just wanted to throw that out there. Welcome to DUP!!!:D
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14th Oct 2012 9:43pm
Ms. Jessica Dawn, "hidden behind closed doors" was correctly used. (just sayin') no offense meant...
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