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Push me under
Grip my wrist
Glare at me lovingly
Cover my eyes
So I can't see the truth
It stares cruelly
Drag me away
Ignore my screams
And cries of protest
I know you love me
I was wrong
My sobs hold no pain
Only thinly veiled happiness
I tell you to stop
You wont take it personally
You never do
You tell me I will die
My prince has come to save me
I am treading water
My mouth breaching the surface
You push me under
Glare at me lovingly
Cover my eyes
So I can't see the truth
It stares cruelly
Drag me away
Ignore my screams
And cries of protest
I know you love me
I was wrong
My sobs hold no pain
Only thinly veiled happiness
I tell you to stop
You wont take it personally
You never do
You tell me I will die
My prince has come to save me
I am treading water
My mouth breaching the surface
You push me under
Published 12th Oct 2012
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12th Oct 2012 8:39pm
Love the feeling of this one - you have a gift. Darkness claims another willing victim!
Anonymous
17th Oct 2012 4:26pm
Very good poem....Its deep and sad, the voice of a soul calling out for help not found, desolation takes over in the poem. I hear you...
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Mourganna¤
Anonymous
17th Apr 2013 4:47pm
Holy shit ouch!!!! Ummm....damn....OK this was short and powerful......
Confucius's say man read poem and enjoyed he maybe like it.
Confucius's say man read poem and enjoyed he maybe like it.
17th Apr 2013 5:24pm
Anonymous
17th Apr 2013 5:28pm
Your welcome
18th Apr 2013 00:49am
The way you take our hand. Into the emotional word of your talent. And show us the Realms we may fear or love is talent itself!
