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Stitch My Lips
Stich my lips
I'm your trash doll
Bruise my hips
I'm the dead fall
Satan dips
I hear love call
Bleed my kiss
Taste my flavor
Feed my bliss
With your razor
Wound my abyss
Be my savior
Lick my scars
Sear like fire
Be my bizarre
A true desire
Go to far
Get us higher
Break my bones
Oh so lovely
Make me moan
Like a banshee
Hellish groan
Deaths my honey
I'm a beauty
Tainted fairy
Your so pretty
A sanctuary
Love you deary
My obituary
I'm your trash doll
Bruise my hips
I'm the dead fall
Satan dips
I hear love call
Bleed my kiss
Taste my flavor
Feed my bliss
With your razor
Wound my abyss
Be my savior
Lick my scars
Sear like fire
Be my bizarre
A true desire
Go to far
Get us higher
Break my bones
Oh so lovely
Make me moan
Like a banshee
Hellish groan
Deaths my honey
I'm a beauty
Tainted fairy
Your so pretty
A sanctuary
Love you deary
My obituary
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Re: Stitch My Lips
12th Oct 2012 5:50pm
re: Re: Stitch My Lips
12th Oct 2012 7:19pm
Thank you for all your relentless support.. I actually really love the simplicity in this one.
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12th Oct 2012 11:45pm
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13th Oct 2012 1:26pm
Re: Stitch My Lips
13th Oct 2012 7:39am
Love the simplicity is the best way to put it, few words draw a detailed picture.. Love it...
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13th Oct 2012 1:26pm
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13th Oct 2012 1:29pm
The style in this and what you say. I love it :) but banshee haha that word's funny to me.
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re: Re: Stitch My Lips
13th Oct 2012 6:04pm
Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it. Lol I thought it was an appropriate word :) funny or not
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re: Re: Stitch My Lips
14th Oct 2012 3:35am
Thank you.. That means alot from someone like you. Lol I don't have pics on like any of my poems, idk now how to do that. It's a kind gesture though hun.
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14th Oct 2012 4:31am
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16th Oct 2012 1:08am
Re: Stitch My Lips
15th Oct 2012 4:35pm
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I'm glad to hear it, it was my pleasure. I think you would really appreciate my new poem, "3:26 am in Galveston" I would be honored of you checked it out and voiced an opinion. I'm not as confident about my "pleasant poetry" as I am about stuff like this.
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16th Oct 2012 5:02pm