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have a heart
gentlemen, have a heart
and please-
don't start something
you can't complete
for a woman can know
what your eyes clearly show
and mistake this for
something she needs
and please-
don't start something
you can't complete
for a woman can know
what your eyes clearly show
and mistake this for
something she needs
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Re: have a heart
10th Oct 2012 12:18pm
Brilliant, us men we do have our moments whrn it comes to not finishing somthing we have started.
fantastic write as always
marcus
fantastic write as always
marcus
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re: Re: have a heart
13th Oct 2012 5:41pm
Thank you, Gabriel. You just made my day! That means so much coming from you!
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20th Oct 2012 2:41am