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Doppelganger
she was so pretty in her
cozy dark brown coffin
as she requested..
so full of serenity that
it made me jealous
i wanted to be with her..
i wanted to be like her..
in her cold arms i wanted to be held
in that very moment i would swear
i'd be her ghostly double
her very own doppelganger..
† to my dearest 22/2/2010
cozy dark brown coffin
as she requested..
so full of serenity that
it made me jealous
i wanted to be with her..
i wanted to be like her..
in her cold arms i wanted to be held
in that very moment i would swear
i'd be her ghostly double
her very own doppelganger..
† to my dearest 22/2/2010
Published 17th May 2010
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Anonymous
25th May 2010 10:31pm
A dark and moving poem of grief, Opheliac. The image of you holding your dearly departed chilled and warmed my heart at the same time. Not an easy feat.
25th May 2010 10:34pm
26th May 2010 4:09pm
sad.. respectful.. obsessive.. and beautiful.. I'm sure she would have loved it
27th May 2010 10:12pm
21st Nov 2010 2:50pm
this poem got it's hook in me deep...
"she was so pretty in her
cozy dark brown coffin
as she requested..
so full of serenity that
it made me jealous"
the jealousy is a strong turn. loved it. now i'm going to have to look up the word "doppelganger". that's the mark of a good poem. it makes me want to look up the words i don't know. thanks for sharing...
"she was so pretty in her
cozy dark brown coffin
as she requested..
so full of serenity that
it made me jealous"
the jealousy is a strong turn. loved it. now i'm going to have to look up the word "doppelganger". that's the mark of a good poem. it makes me want to look up the words i don't know. thanks for sharing...
7th Jun 2012 7:31pm
this poem drips with grief and love..so beautifully written..wishing you peace Crim
