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shadows
the light is going fast
and you'll soon see
or maybe say (like
other men have said)
you look best in shadows
it's those high cheekbones
so-called bedroom eyes
the this or that of you
it's supposed to
be a compliment but
you don't see the same things
i see in the darkness
mainly the shadow
of the shadow
and you'll soon see
or maybe say (like
other men have said)
you look best in shadows
it's those high cheekbones
so-called bedroom eyes
the this or that of you
it's supposed to
be a compliment but
you don't see the same things
i see in the darkness
mainly the shadow
of the shadow
Published 8th Oct 2012
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9th Oct 2012 7:31am
"you don't see the same things
i see in the darkness
mainly the shadow
of the shadow"
My favourite lines.
Wonderful write Faith.
i see in the darkness
mainly the shadow
of the shadow"
My favourite lines.
Wonderful write Faith.
10th Oct 2012 1:45am
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10th Oct 2012 1:51am
Gabriel-I'm both honored and humbled by your wonderful remarks. You have made my day. Much thanks, my friend. :)
9th Oct 2012 3:15pm
You describe very well the nature of subjectivity. Favorite part: "it's supposed to
be a compliment but
you don't see the same things."
be a compliment but
you don't see the same things."
10th Oct 2012 1:56am
