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Nothingness
something
always
somethingness
always
blessed
when anaesthesia
is at it`s best
only then
true nothingness
nothinger
than paralyzed
by medicine chest
nothinger
than face down
motionless
after cocktails
countless
nothingness
the only refuge
when lover rejects
regardless
of excruciating pain
I profess
regardlesser
than sacrifice
in her service
I acquiesced
at the time
it seemed
totally selfless
yet now I sense
it was perhaps
subconcious
forcing self
to invest
emotional hedge
psychological chips
redempt
when sufficiently
stressed
but I digress
nothingness
nothinger
than death
good `ol
last breath
Spirit released
through energy
mysterious
only nothingness
relieves
pains from
pondering closure
of this mess
oh genius
anaesthetist
bring me
your best
swirling tank
of gaseous
rest
mis-interpret
lab test
dont double-check
simply forget
let innocent
human error
eternally
render
me oblivious
in glorious
perpetual
nothingness
always
somethingness
always
blessed
when anaesthesia
is at it`s best
only then
true nothingness
nothinger
than paralyzed
by medicine chest
nothinger
than face down
motionless
after cocktails
countless
nothingness
the only refuge
when lover rejects
regardless
of excruciating pain
I profess
regardlesser
than sacrifice
in her service
I acquiesced
at the time
it seemed
totally selfless
yet now I sense
it was perhaps
subconcious
forcing self
to invest
emotional hedge
psychological chips
redempt
when sufficiently
stressed
but I digress
nothingness
nothinger
than death
good `ol
last breath
Spirit released
through energy
mysterious
only nothingness
relieves
pains from
pondering closure
of this mess
oh genius
anaesthetist
bring me
your best
swirling tank
of gaseous
rest
mis-interpret
lab test
dont double-check
simply forget
let innocent
human error
eternally
render
me oblivious
in glorious
perpetual
nothingness
Published 7th Oct 2012
| Edited 8th Oct 2012
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7th Oct 2012 8:25pm
8th Oct 2012 6:13pm
Bringing out a "Sense" with words
is a sign of connecting -- THANKS Clio!
8th Oct 2012 8:20am
Anonymous
8th Oct 2012 10:17am
I can relate drivel.
Strider
Strider
8th Oct 2012 6:14pm
8th Oct 2012 3:40pm
8th Oct 2012 5:29pm
Thank you Ms. Devilish ..... see/hearing you
on "the tube" was a big positive influence on me
to get started with the Multimedia -- thanks!
on "the tube" was a big positive influence on me
to get started with the Multimedia -- thanks!
8th Oct 2012 8:33pm
love the reading. creative. it's surprisingly comforting to listen to your voice.
8th Oct 2012 10:30pm
thank you! this is my first recitation - your words are very encouraging to me.......
8th Oct 2012 8:59pm
8th Oct 2012 10:32pm
this is my 1st recitation -- so your comments mean
even more to me on this piece...
9th Oct 2012 7:48am
I am IN LOVE with this piece!!!!
It was AMAZINGLY Crafted!
Yes friend, you're moving forward indeed!:-)
It was AMAZINGLY Crafted!
Yes friend, you're moving forward indeed!:-)
9th Oct 2012 8:09am
RAIN !! Hey -- how are you"
Wow -- this piece made a good impression on
a few people.
Thanks for your support - you`re the best.
Wow -- this piece made a good impression on
a few people.
Thanks for your support - you`re the best.
Anonymous
11th Oct 2012 00:29am
=) great job Drive
11th Oct 2012 1:15am
Thank You for Listening TCMN -
you were the first to suggest i recite --
Waaaaaaaaaay back --- on a piece of erotica!
dont know if I`m ready for THAT yet : > )
you were the first to suggest i recite --
Waaaaaaaaaay back --- on a piece of erotica!
dont know if I`m ready for THAT yet : > )
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