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the only petal
the only time i ever feel okay now
is when the sun goes down
and the dusk sweeps over
and the moon isn't so sad
or invisible
i have never been a morning
person
i have always been
just a little
too sad
the moon and i
seem to find
our contentment
stitched into
each other
somewhere like
somewhere, the most
beautiful thing
is becoming
the most
frail
is when the sun goes down
and the dusk sweeps over
and the moon isn't so sad
or invisible
i have never been a morning
person
i have always been
just a little
too sad
the moon and i
seem to find
our contentment
stitched into
each other
somewhere like
somewhere, the most
beautiful thing
is becoming
the most
frail
Published 2nd Oct 2012
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3rd Oct 2012 9:13am
loved this one.
a melancholic mood and the moon's reference digs me like a deja vu.
the stressed spacing of the ending verse, which reveals a perfect flower in meaning, not just like a petal. just beautifully done!
thank you fr the read.
a melancholic mood and the moon's reference digs me like a deja vu.
the stressed spacing of the ending verse, which reveals a perfect flower in meaning, not just like a petal. just beautifully done!
thank you fr the read.
