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SundaMournin of an ElizabethanEra(FarGone'Way)
byfootoopoomistDaKzakSuSe30,2012\11:39am
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(itslike as if, perhaps,may'be)
there wee were
together in sundaymournin
dream.......yOur 'forever'[ly]
love & me taggin'long in
sumkinda Freudian
misdemeanor
for professional(which ye
took real serious in
that oldtime 'real Life')
fun.........
s o me day mornin, ' I '
won't
"wake up" - &
you'll be Gone
any way
vvvvvvvvdkzk2012sepvvvvv
·
(itslike as if, perhaps,may'be)
there wee were
together in sundaymournin
dream.......yOur 'forever'[ly]
love & me taggin'long in
sumkinda Freudian
misdemeanor
for professional(which ye
took real serious in
that oldtime 'real Life')
fun.........
s o me day mornin, ' I '
won't
"wake up" - &
you'll be Gone
any way
vvvvvvvvdkzk2012sepvvvvv
Published 30th Sep 2012
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Anonymous
30th Sep 2012 8:02pm
It seems in the end we all disappear, in love and in life. Loved your creative title, btw:)
30th Sep 2012 10:50pm
30th Sep 2012 11:00pm
Again I am really enjoying the formatting. It takes a few thoughts or an experience and enriches it in a creative and complex way. The pic is a good touch as well. Something I've been thinking of incorporating into my own works.
1st Oct 2012 11:32pm
thankyou again..........the pixtrs is all 'my own', meanin made-by-me.....
eye
refuse to lift from the cyberbins of HD photochopped
renditions of 'beauty'....ha!
such a reb'el !
eye
refuse to lift from the cyberbins of HD photochopped
renditions of 'beauty'....ha!
such a reb'el !
