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Everlovin'DeadGuys, NakedNude,eXPosed
byDanfotopoomerKozakFriSep28,2012
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['Your/changes/have/been/saved']
[b]prepondering 'this',
my(o'my) dis
punctilious
g a r b covers
little else
than
plain naked[ness]
ord
inary........no
l o n g er of
c a r nal interest to
revered old dead poets
(who mighta further'd ye,
given an opening)
so, now, as now again, thee
nymphs
ye see arelike
a comique nightmare
o f longing ,
l o n ging
cut-short by yOur
pathetic/pathologic
humantime
irrelevance [ of]
a body
of death
moving
(all'most) visibly
(viscerally ! aiyeeee!)
c l o s e r .................
would-
it-
were- dear sprite,
(ahhhh, pixie d'amours!)
might (o might)
give
thee th'time
of A Day ,
just
one more day just
one more time[/b]
~['Your/changes/have/been/saved']~
aaaaaaaaaaaaDKzK28sep2012
·
['Your/changes/have/been/saved']
[b]prepondering 'this',
my(o'my) dis
punctilious
g a r b covers
little else
than
plain naked[ness]
ord
inary........no
l o n g er of
c a r nal interest to
revered old dead poets
(who mighta further'd ye,
given an opening)
so, now, as now again, thee
nymphs
ye see arelike
a comique nightmare
o f longing ,
l o n ging
cut-short by yOur
pathetic/pathologic
humantime
irrelevance [ of]
a body
of death
moving
(all'most) visibly
(viscerally ! aiyeeee!)
c l o s e r .................
would-
it-
were- dear sprite,
(ahhhh, pixie d'amours!)
might (o might)
give
thee th'time
of A Day ,
just
one more day just
one more time[/b]
~['Your/changes/have/been/saved']~
aaaaaaaaaaaaDKzK28sep2012
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