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In the Wilderness
1.
In the spring there
is hope. What hope?
Only to die, which is
to graduate, to look
forward to.
2.
But "hope" means
a return, a youngness
which is over-flowing,
women without bras: like
a beautiful girl saying
that it seems to be the case.
In the spring there
is hope. What hope?
Only to die, which is
to graduate, to look
forward to.
2.
But "hope" means
a return, a youngness
which is over-flowing,
women without bras: like
a beautiful girl saying
that it seems to be the case.
Published 22nd Sep 2012
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22nd Sep 2012 4:09pm
marcella
like the way you build in the abstractive-ness tied with visual commonalities in themes dealt by you!
keep writing gr8 n sure,a good read.
~uma
like the way you build in the abstractive-ness tied with visual commonalities in themes dealt by you!
keep writing gr8 n sure,a good read.
~uma
22nd Sep 2012 7:16pm
Thanks for the encouragement. You can say many things in a few words, ("abstractiveness"), ("visual comonalities"). The last I need to reflect on deeply. Thank you, again.
22nd Sep 2012 10:13pm
i like your style...it's really cool...another really good poem that i very much enjoyed :)
23rd Sep 2012 2:43am
