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Felt it Indie, and you wrote it beautifully.

Thank you very much Scattered Thoughts. Much appreciated. Glad you enjoyed :)

A very beautiful write. I could feel your emotions through it.

I feel I can really relate to this poem, being that I felt this way so many times with those I've loved so much, and still do feel this way on occasion when I think back on them. How easily they moved on pass me, y'know?

Thank you Cinny for your kind words and lovely comment. And yeah, I understand but it's like to have people just move on past me like I was just a speed bump in their journey :)

You're welcome. (:

I understand that feeling as well, it's not a nice one.

Ah yes Miss Indie

A very good write this overflowing with valid emotion. It's starnge that how we just happen to fill space in lives temporarily and then we are left to wonder... why they no longer need us.

Well done, like this.

Al -x-

Thank you very much Mr Lip for your lovely feedback. :D It's much appreciated. Glad you enjoyed this piece.

Peace, Indie

Sweetheart you matter to me!!! Great write, felt your heart while reading.. Emotional. Thank you..

Thank you Dr L, for your lovely comment, and you're welcome. :) Glad you enjoyed this.

Peace, Indie

I really liked "My entire existence breathes lies out into the atmosphere."  So true.  We are not who we think (or have been told) we are.  Very honest poem.  You display wonderful poetical ability.  I have 2 questions, meant in all seriousness but not trying to get you mad (you can explain the answers, if you want on my message thingee):  1.  In stanza 4, who is doing the judging?  This is not clear to this reader, and, 2, I don't think you need the final "Did I ever matter at all?"  Actualy I think its redundant.  You have marvelous poetical skills and (usually) use them wisely.  Thank you for letting me read this.

marcella1

Thank you for your honest feedback Marcella. In S4 I was alluding to people in general, how looks are deceiving and first impressions aren't always accurate.  
 
The last two lines I added in to reinforce the feeling. I'm not sure on them, but I'm leaving them for now.  
 
Thanks again. :)
 
Peace, Indie