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Crazy Love
Am I crazy to fall madly in love with you
and to yearn for your caress, and your elusive kiss
Our nightly tryst of passionate whispers
fill our hearts with desires so intense
As our passion-filled bodies yearn for more,
join me in my dreams and share my crazy love.
My dreams of you were obscured by my selfish desires
for I was lured by the grandeur of a carefree city life
Then one day you showed up in the flesh
our bodies were fusioned by our tight embrace
As we felt the burning sensations thru our lips
your silent quest to find me, has come to an end.
Here I am my love, hearken to my plea
I love you then and now, but your heart can’t see.
My childhood glances as I caught your sweet smile,
revealed more than what my young heart could say.
Every time I smiled you knew, there was something more.
Am I crazy for loving you my Adelaide
You are smart and lovely, elegant and compassionate
you were the girl of my dreams, and never been forgotten
I beseech you to look at the bright side
and never to forget why we love each other so.
Watch the birds flying freely across the sun drenched sky
You will find me in their midst as I join their flight
Come fly with me our souls entwined,
and retrace our paths where it all began
Feel our crazy love, once innocent and pure.
Published 17th Sep 2012
| Edited 5th Dec 2012
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17th Sep 2012 9:16am
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17th Sep 2012 1:32pm
Thanks a lot for the pointers, Gail. I must admit, I'm lacking structure, as I write randomly whatever comes off my mind. I couldn't write for months maybe because of mental block, but once the ideas come flowing, I could finish writing in less than 5 minutes.
On writing sonnets, I gave it up. I only did it just to challenge myself. It's easier to write free verses rather than a structured poetry, at least for me. So far, I had only two sonnets and still thinking whether I will share the other one here.
Once again, thanks Gail for your input...I really do appreciate it.
On writing sonnets, I gave it up. I only did it just to challenge myself. It's easier to write free verses rather than a structured poetry, at least for me. So far, I had only two sonnets and still thinking whether I will share the other one here.
Once again, thanks Gail for your input...I really do appreciate it.
23rd Mar 2013 8:27pm
Hi Engrvv, I am reading this because of your comments on "overlooked". I think all poets have their own style of writing. No one is the same, even if the poetry form is similar. I'm not a poet, just an aspirant , but I read and love to write. For me I care more for coherence than smart words. I read and write with my heart first: and this poem has lots of it. This is a beautiful poem. In competitions however we are subjected to the hosts likes and preferences.
24th Mar 2013 1:07am
Part of this poem and parts from "A September to Remember" made it your choice winner in one of your contests, Grace...that was Silent Quest, thank you by the way! I did that on purpose though because I have two different websites that I'm currently designing; I want the poems to have a link to each other.
Once again, thank you for noticing where I'm coming from...most of my love poems are true-to-life and on-going; that's why they all came from the bottom of my heart. Also, thanks for your kind words.
Once again, thank you for noticing where I'm coming from...most of my love poems are true-to-life and on-going; that's why they all came from the bottom of my heart. Also, thanks for your kind words.
24th Mar 2013 9:31am
30th Sep 2013 1:33pm
Thank you for the read and comment Vishal...also thanks for subscribing to my updates!
