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Void
What was the beginning?
It was probably need.
I'm not sure, though.
Did love come next? Probably.
I know for a fact that hate
Was present the most.
Embarrassment was in the mix,
Lasting almost as long as hate.
I think pain became a combination
Of the depression and sorrow.
But I can't tell anymore.
Now that they're all gone
There isn't much left.
I think they left through the void,
But I might be wrong.
And I think it's near now,
Which might not be true...
I think I'm right this time though...
So what will be my ending?
It was probably need.
I'm not sure, though.
Did love come next? Probably.
I know for a fact that hate
Was present the most.
Embarrassment was in the mix,
Lasting almost as long as hate.
I think pain became a combination
Of the depression and sorrow.
But I can't tell anymore.
Now that they're all gone
There isn't much left.
I think they left through the void,
But I might be wrong.
And I think it's near now,
Which might not be true...
I think I'm right this time though...
So what will be my ending?
Published 14th Sep 2012
| Edited 15th Sep 2012
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Out of all your poems so far on DU...this one is my favorite...it's a mystery...I crave for more...I would greatly enjoy more poems...so that my sin can be purged...for now...o....and I love questions at the end of poems..keep it up...
4th Nov 2013 5:22pm
wow... Great piece.
and I agree ... the mystery within this is astounding ...
Very Well Done!!
Darker
and I agree ... the mystery within this is astounding ...
Very Well Done!!
Darker
