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Questioning The Gravity of Grace
When your final graces of good-bye were set upon me...
The love I felt was most sincere and profound.
I knew that even though our blood does not match...
I was a daughter whom you loved ever so.
I did not see the anguish that was cast a fear....
I did not know the others....would try and make me disappear.
For the love you gave to me was true...
you grew me to be who I am today...
Now daily I'm forced to sit and ponder....why was my life stolen and branished away?
The love I felt was most sincere and profound.
I knew that even though our blood does not match...
I was a daughter whom you loved ever so.
I did not see the anguish that was cast a fear....
I did not know the others....would try and make me disappear.
For the love you gave to me was true...
you grew me to be who I am today...
Now daily I'm forced to sit and ponder....why was my life stolen and branished away?
Published 12th Sep 2012
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12th Sep 2012 9:15pm
lalamelissa.
a question we all ask ourselves at one time or another. A bit of an unexpected twist at the end.
good show, welcome.
a question we all ask ourselves at one time or another. A bit of an unexpected twist at the end.
good show, welcome.
12th Sep 2012 9:30pm
Thank you Lepperochan for your welcoming reply...it is true that as we grow into our characters in adulthood, we seem to reflect on the adults who've help give a hand in raising and/or guiding us. Whether it be positive or a negative impact we are given freedom and self control to makes all the choices we choose.
After losing my dad who was my step-father(see right there, I never had to even reference him as with a title)....I was then labeled and now lost more than just a father but family as well...
This can only make me and my own family stronger...time does heal as well all know <3
After losing my dad who was my step-father(see right there, I never had to even reference him as with a title)....I was then labeled and now lost more than just a father but family as well...
This can only make me and my own family stronger...time does heal as well all know <3
