as art

Lightbaron.

not a lot to say about this except I liked it a lot.

I wonder is 'for the best word to start that line with, it's certainly poetic in a classical context .  I was thinking 'when or 'as (just to have something constructive to add)

good show man.

thank ya sir... i will take the "for" into consideration. again thanks for the comment!

Short and sweet and not at all disappointing. There is a big truth in your few words. Really love this, no constructive crit to offer, this is seamless.

Peace, Indie

dig it- thank ya kindly ms. indie

thank ya kindly for reading and commenting

YES!

Nothing left to add, it's just freaking right, LB. Good damn piece.

AWESOME!...glad it was dug by ya

Very very true

so clearly false...ha - thank ya my dear

Words of my heart. Beautiful. :)

Thank ya kindly new friend