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Poorly-Braced
It wont impress you,
but I want to hurt you.
You were all my worlds,
but now just abhorrence
in the nude.
The mermaids are spinning,
limbs have caught within you, these
dreams that you're having
are gutting bedrooms.
it's all just the teen-age;
no humans here.
but I want to hurt you.
You were all my worlds,
but now just abhorrence
in the nude.
The mermaids are spinning,
limbs have caught within you, these
dreams that you're having
are gutting bedrooms.
it's all just the teen-age;
no humans here.
Published 8th Sep 2012
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8th Sep 2012 7:19am
If you change up your rhyme scheme your poem will have less of a sing sing effect and be taken more seriously :)
8th Sep 2012 8:13am
10th Sep 2012 4:04pm
