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Mindfuck
Why is it
Everybody else
Can just make me plain despise myself?
My mind
Is blown up
Like a doll.
Nothing inside
Constantly enduring a brutal rape.
Night
And night again.
A pressing force
That settles on top of me
Squishing all the air out
Squeezing me dry.
Everybody else
Can just make me plain despise myself?
My mind
Is blown up
Like a doll.
Nothing inside
Constantly enduring a brutal rape.
Night
And night again.
A pressing force
That settles on top of me
Squishing all the air out
Squeezing me dry.
Published 7th Sep 2012
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don't despise.....
just let ye be (no this vs that necessary)
yr a beautiful talent, but don't put 'that' into your ego.......
sweet lovely love yr writes (far more than i've read in anyone else so young....butt eye'm a braindamaged old knucklehead, so don't take what aye say too seriously)
& eye'll be watchin ye
just let ye be (no this vs that necessary)
yr a beautiful talent, but don't put 'that' into your ego.......
sweet lovely love yr writes (far more than i've read in anyone else so young....butt eye'm a braindamaged old knucklehead, so don't take what aye say too seriously)
& eye'll be watchin ye
27th Sep 2012 3:52am
Anonymous
27th Sep 2012 2:42pm
Wonderful poem... one can rape a body or a mind...both are power games....
You have captured this very very well
Keep writing
It lets the pain out
Peace
Kitty
You have captured this very very well
Keep writing
It lets the pain out
Peace
Kitty
27th Sep 2012 7:27pm
