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My Heart
MY HEART
A heart so young
A heart of gold
A heart sublime
A heart my own
A heart that's taken
A heart that's open
A heart that's dying
A heart that's broken
A heart so young
A heart of gold
A heart sublime
A heart my own
A heart that's taken
A heart that's open
A heart that's dying
A heart that's broken
Published 28th Aug 2012
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14th Sep 2012 6:57am
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22nd Oct 2012 2:42pm
i just love the poetic meter here, it makes the entire poem tick much like a pulse, lovely. kudos sweet. you nailed it.
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23rd Oct 2012 2:56am
23rd Nov 2012 8:54am
lovely little poem,i agree with the last comment,ticks like a pulse.which i really like cause its all about the heart.
