not even perfection

So true Rachel...simple and effective thought here!

Strider

I think your "last" should have an "s"....whoops...

Good eye Strider, thank you.

So glad you stopped by.

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agreed.........beautiful poem

Thank you so much, I appreciate that.

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Beautiful poem Rachel, I really liked it.

Thank you Levi, I am so glad you stopped by.

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"majestic amber glows of scarlet curves" Magic with your words!! Great job sweetheart!

What's up doc?

Thank you for your kind words, and for stopping by.

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Just like a breathtaking mirage suddenly disappeared.
 
Captivating write Rachel. :)

Magdalena,

thank you so much for your kind words.

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Beautiful Rachel, as always, you never disappoint it is a pleasure to read you.

Red

Ahh Gypsy, thank you so much, you are too kind.

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I agree with everyone's comments above. Beautiful, indeed, Rachel. Absolutely wonderful and simply captivating!!!

Thank you Jessica, that means a lot to me.

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A beautiful write and a satisfying read
Agree with all of the above
Kitty

Kitty, thank you so much for your kind words.

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These moments of splendor are precious. How amazing we get to enjoy and breathe deeply so many of these timeless moments.

Your foray into minimal word usage succeeds. Lovely :)

Thanks Ken.

I love it when you stop by.

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you never cease to amaze me with your words :)
very well penned!

Thank you so much milkyway.

I feel the exact same about your words as well.

Thanks for stopping by.

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These flashes of genius are why I follow You Rachel..this one minimalist in style, yet so full of vibrant mental colour..love reading you :)

btw..the only O in elegance would normally have an exclamation mark or be spelled Oh! ;)

Wow, thank you so much for such a gracious comment. I am truly appreciative.
 
Ah, I am a horrible speller and my red lines aren't working. Thank you for that, I will fix it.

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Hey Miss O.

This was my favourite part...

"Not Even Perfection...
majestic amber glows
of scarlet curves
 
rest
over swirls
of diluted jade
and intense sapphire waters
 
minutes of elogance
swept away
as perfection
abandons the heavens
 
nothing
lasts forever "

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Aww, what a wonderful thing to say. I'm glad you like it. Thank you so much, it means so much for you to stop by.

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The description is at least as beautiful as any sunset I've ever seen. Simply Beautiful.

Oh wow! That is really a great compliment. Thank you very much for saying that.

So glad you stopped by.

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The only thing that stays the same-is change...
Well expressed thoughts here-well done
Peace, Miki

I love that phrase. It is very true. Thank you for that miki, and for stopping by and commenting. It means a lot to me.

I hope you are feeling well, or will be soon.

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Ok, I'll start with my own personal nit-picks:
In a minimalist poem such as this one I would also take out the capitals in the title and remove the ellipse at the end.

The first line got me questioning something straight away. Can 'glow' be plural and countable? I know something can glow, so it glows which requires an 's'. Just something that seemed strange to me. I'm also not sure what the amber glows and scarlet curves are. It's a bit cryptic and I was thinking maybe Sun or fire but then why scarlet?

I get the rest though. :) and it is described wonderfully and very colourful. The only other suggestion I would make as it's a short poem is space it out a bit more. The more space between certain lines/verses is very important at adding emphasis. Before the last two lines I'd personally leave two spaces because it's more than strong enough to stand on its own and breathe.
The poem is really good at the wrap up at the end is beautiful. Most of what I said is just personal preference; sometimes better to ignore it. :)

I would never ignore such sound advice from a great poet like yourself.

I think glow is better.

Scarlet is a red/orange color, I used to describe the color the sky looks as the sun is setting.

I agree, it is better with more space. Thank you fot that.

I really appreciate the time and effort in your feedback Mr. A ;)

Thank you.

so much intense and colorful imagery with so few words. this is perfection.

Thank you, that means a lot!